The Hybrid (completed slowly editing)

The Hybrid (completed slowly editing)

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NeNe By conecha Completed

Hi i'm winter snow, yea i know thats a weird name.i live in Chicago with my mom we have a good relationship and every one thinks i look just like her. i am light skinned with long brown hair , grey eyes and a nice body i think . the only difference between me and my mom is that her eyes are green people says she looks like my older sister. so today is when all the trouble begins.

i'm walking down stairs to go eat breakfast and i know something is not right, because i smell my favorite breakfast which is french toast,eggs,and ham. my mom only cooks when something bad happens or she has something to tell that is not so good, any other time we eat take out. as i head in to the kitchen i hear the ham sizzling, my mothers back is to me when i call her she is tense.

"mom" i said "what is wrong?" 

"why does something have to be wrong snow?" my mom asked 

"because you are cooking my favorite breakfast and you never cook unless something is wrong', " so give it to me straight" 

"well " my ...

Always lightskined. Sometimes its nice to see brown skinned and dark skinned as well. My own opinion.
phenomabombs phenomabombs Sep 17, 2014
yeah no. I absolutely hate it when people don't put quotes around dialogue. Sorry, but I'm not continuing
RYLEAA RYLEAA Mar 14, 2014
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                              Ugh, I know the feeling.. I've moved like 6-7 times. (Around the same area though)
conecha conecha Dec 09, 2012
@YesemelyCabrera thanks for that this is my first one. I will try to get better
3ternally_in_love 3ternally_in_love Nov 30, 2012
Dude not good its a good plot but its sounds like you're writing a play or something it doesn't sound like a story okay so I don't know I really like your idea just  your not going at it right