Doors That Lead to Nowhere

Doors That Lead to Nowhere

10.1K Reads 675 Votes 6 Part Story
RSByford By RSByford Updated Feb 01, 2013

...Never before had the city been breached. Never before had a shadow intruded upon its light. It has fallen. And all which stands between the beginning and the end is lost. The darkness runs deep now. The tide of chaos approaches. It is swallowing us. Forgive me, forgive us all.

xBlackstonex xBlackstonex Jul 30, 2013
Truly amazing prologue
                              I'm really surprised that you don't have more reads!
Vivinin Vivinin Mar 17, 2013
I adore your writing style already. Informative yet still smooth and not forced. You have the ability to bring words to life. :3
xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Mar 11, 2013
WOW this is really fast paced and suspenseful! I can tell I'm going to enjoy this :D
SomewhatDistracted SomewhatDistracted Feb 22, 2013
Such great use of imagery! Wow! This is excellent! I couldn't find any problems with grammar, nor could I find anything that needed tightening! Truly excellent!
diamondis diamondis Feb 07, 2013
This is intriguing! I love your writing style and Vascar seems like a very interesting character. I always admire when writers make up a world all their own from scratch. It's not an easy thing to do. Bravo!
MarvelousThings MarvelousThings Feb 06, 2013
Fast paced, engaging and some great word choices. Definitely going to be reading on.