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Kidnapped by my alpha mate!!

Kidnapped by my alpha mate!!

71.2K Reads 2.5K Votes 10 Part Story
Tyisha By TyishaCole Updated Dec 30, 2014

What happens when you are sitting with your friends at Native New Yorker having a good time.  When you decide after that you and your friends go to the park to hang out. Then next thing you know my friends and I are running in the woods trying to get away.

rachelbeth1002 rachelbeth1002 Aug 19, 2016
I think if you enhanced the details of other characters and let the the main character incidentally describe herself this chapter might flow better( it's really good though
Gabby_Amazing204 Gabby_Amazing204 Jul 07, 2016
Yo that Gabriella for high school musical you could have picked a different person😕🙎😕🙎😕🙎😕🙎🙎😕😕🙎🙎😕😕🙎😕😕🙎🙎
rachelbeth1002 rachelbeth1002 Aug 19, 2016
I think that this chapter sounds a lot like a summary and there are a few details that just back track you plot but really it's all in the detail the imagry is what makes the words turn to pictures (still really good )
Sesias Sesias Sep 09, 2016
I would snuggle up to my friends if I thought I would die. I want to have my last moments with my friends
BaltoLover17 BaltoLover17 Nov 11, 2015
Okay, I'm done with this one. You clearly don't know how to write properly, so goodbye. Good luck on the rest of your crap-tacular "story", if you can even call it that, lol. 2 thumbs down!!
SapphiraHarrington SapphiraHarrington Jul 15, 2015
-gets tied up, drops to the ground and attempts to roll away from kidnappers - THEY SEE ME ROLLING, THEY HATIN'