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Unrequited Love

Unrequited Love

581 Reads 25 Votes 1 Part Story
Ira By msSavannah Completed

You have a crush or you're in love with someone. He loves somebody else. He didn't love you back in return. Now, you're just imagining, dreaming and overthinking about things that you wish had happened if only he loved you back..

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msSavannah msSavannah Dec 01, 2012
@Scarlet_Shilouette Maraming, maraming salamat po!! :) Parang hindi na ako magugustuhan ng crush ko, may relasyon na sila ni girl eh </3 SALAMAT PO, ULIT <3
Scarlet_Silhouette Scarlet_Silhouette Dec 01, 2012
Ganda ah. Hehehehe. Wag kang mag-alala. Malay mo magustuhan ka din nung crush mo *wink* Heheheh. Lalim din nung ibang words na ginamit mo. Hehe. Very professional. I love the video to the side too. :)
Kkabyulism Kkabyulism Nov 09, 2012
Nice! 14 ka lang diba? ahaha! Pero ang galing lang kasi ang ganda ng poem na 'to! [Peyl ako sa poem eh! wala kong future dun! TRYING HARD!]
                              Ang ganda nung meaning nung poem TT__TT Ang chaaakit!
Khyyosm Khyyosm Nov 09, 2012
Nice poem Loraine :) 
                              suggestion pod xD
                              put word meaning maybe? jk
                              But yeah some of the words don't fit the mood of the poem. 
                              Opinion lang ha, cause I'm not pro or anything. xD
TheUltimateFatMan TheUltimateFatMan Oct 28, 2012
I like the poem. however i think your choice of words is a little too forced. for instance you used "guffawed" instead of saying i saw you laugh. that and "subsist" you could use "sustain" instead. just those minor things. but overall the message of the poem was good.
msSavannah msSavannah Oct 28, 2012
@RikkiAllessandra Wow Rikki! So long! Hhaha. Thanksfor the suggestions! I'll note that! and thanks for reading!! <3