The Not-So-Quite-Love-Story Story

The Not-So-Quite-Love-Story Story

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ChocolateCappuccino_ By ChocolateCappuccino_ Updated Oct 16

Claris Jacobsen may have the demeanour of a normal 16 year old girl. But In reality, she's anything but. Claris' fake smiles and fierce attitude is just another shield she puts up to protect herself from the dangers of the world, one of them being Ethan Rivers.

Ethan's your quintessential bad boy- Hot and rebellious. He's the guy with the motorcycle all girls want a ride on; He's the guy all girls want to date. But Ethan doesn't do commitment, not when he's someone close to him. That's when he came to the painful conclusion that people do leave you, whether they mean to or not. 

Ethan and Claris both share a passionate dislike for each other.

So what happens when they get paired up for an English project? What happens when a third person gets thrown into the mix and it just so happens to be Ethan's worst enemy?

Find out in., The Not-So-Quite-Love-Story Story

jacee_14 jacee_14 Jun 20, 2015
XD their schools name is so ironic considering they aren't acting like saints hahaahah lol
hit_gurl hit_gurl Jan 18, 2015
you got me hooked with the first paragraph. i am LITTERALLY in love with your story! <3
                              even though you dive right in there is some really good character buildup etc. 
                              i love it.
wordsmith- wordsmith- Jan 15, 2015
I wasn't really expecting to like this story, because I thought your title was really long, but so far I like this a lot. I thought the beginning was pretty funny. XD I like realism your story has so far as well, I can really relate to the main character. :)
KaitlynStopa KaitlynStopa Jan 14, 2015
I love it so far!The plot's amazing!The character's amazing!I can't wait to read the whole story!
NerissaMcC NerissaMcC Jan 08, 2015
There are a lot of punctuation mistakes and the plot's a little cliché, but overall this is interesting so far. This is sort of random, but I like the name Claris :) I wonder what'll happen next...
loudlydreamer loudlydreamer Oct 31, 2014
This book has turn out pretty interesting, either way I feel like you need a little more description and to fix some typos, but it seems great so far