The Alpha's Imprint (twilight fanfic)

The Alpha's Imprint (twilight fanfic)

28.3K Reads 915 Votes 20 Part Story
Victoria Stewart By VictoriaStewart276 Completed

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Bella has always known that Jacob and the others are wolves because her dad is Quileute but then what happens when Jacob Black imprints on Bella and she becomes part of the pack.

  • bella
  • bellaskids
  • thecullens
  • thepack
  • thevolturi
Coolart123 Coolart123 Oct 15, 2017
Really needs quotation marks it's so hard to read with out them
Pinkparry2 Pinkparry2 Oct 27, 2017
It needs quotation marks around the dialogue otherwise it’s good
Quotations  nothing else to be nit picky about. I LOVE DIS BOOK
Sadako5689 Sadako5689 Dec 28, 2017
And punctuation would be good as well as quotation marks. The word 'and' does not replace a full stop or a comma.
ClarissaHerondale348 ClarissaHerondale348 Sep 05, 2016
Please use quotations it's really confusing... But over all love it!
SweetPotato394 SweetPotato394 Aug 11, 2016
Okay I love the sory line so far,
                              The ideas is there but it's hard to read.
                              I think if you go back and edit your story and add some punctuation it would be much better.