Alpha's Slave Girl

Alpha's Slave Girl

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kaylawebb16 By kaylawebb16 Updated Oct 28, 2014

My name is Kelley and I am 16 years old. I am a human and I have to attend this year's slave picking. This year is the soon to be alpha's turn to pick a slave. I just pray that this isn't the year I get picked.

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- - Aug 31, 2017
I'm sorry this is a good idea but the grammar the way this is formed isn't so great
_Hanna_H_ _Hanna_H_ Mar 24
I like the concept and the idea but I suggest you try adding more details and explaining more. That way the chapters will be longer and reading them would be much better cuz rn it sounds plain