Being Noticed

Being Noticed

92.5K Reads 3.2K Votes 22 Part Story
☮peaceanddisaster☮ By peaceanddisaster Completed

Kayla Bradman’s used to being ignored by, and hiding in the shadows of her big sister, Elysha. She's used to getting bullied by all the cute guys and cheerleaders. But then a new family arrives. There are two parents and two guys. One guy Elysha’s age, and one guy Kayla’s age.  And they’re living next-door to Kayla. So, as normal, she avoids them-just like she avoids other guys. But the guy Kayla’s age is interested in Kayla. And he’s going to get what he wants. But with that comes a whirlwind of drama, break-ups, get-togethers and break-ups. But is that cliche saying "True Love Conquers All' going to  happen in this story? Is it really true?
(This story is probably the worst out of all my stories-so I'm deleting it soon. Go check out my profile page for more [completed] stories-which are much better)

Haven't even started the first chapter and I am starting to like this book already
ecrivain0 ecrivain0 Mar 06
I like the story line but I am finding it hard to read because I don't like the character. She is rude and I don't like the way she speaks to people.
                              Hopefully when I keep on reading hat will change.
Xx_Aleigha_xX Xx_Aleigha_xX Mar 02, 2014
I started reading the description.... and I was like wow I have to read this lol
UniqueSkittles UniqueSkittles Feb 14, 2014
Please don't delete D: I just started reading it! Please don't delete!
peaceanddisaster peaceanddisaster Dec 14, 2012
@Gummybeardays You kinda have to have some boring stuff in it though-lol :) Thanks for the advice though
Gummybeardays Gummybeardays Dec 14, 2012
This is awsome :) But you should  cut the unimportant detail off. Not all the detail. I mean like when shes brushing her teeth or you know getting ready?