Runaway Bride (Editing)

Runaway Bride (Editing)

44 Part Story 3.5M Reads 45.5K Votes
Chantal Fredette By strength0629 Completed

The night before the wedding Derrick spoke to his fiancé over the phone.  They said how much they loved each other and that they would meet at the alter the next day.  Both, Derrick and Angela had a few friends over that evening, they stayed in the same hotel but in different rooms.
    
    Except the next day Angela was no where in sight.  Only leaving a note and her engagement ring behind while everything else was gone.
    
    Derrick couldn't understand what went wrong.  She didn't explain and with new information from others, telling him how nervous she had been, he knew she had a change of heart and left him.
    
    Five years later with no contact from Angela's family or friends, Derrick receives a call from her father, Dave.  Dave informs him that the police showed up at his home early this morning and was told to go to the hospital.
    
    Angela had been found and now the policemen would like to know why they never officially declared Angela as a missing person?  Also, everyone would like to know who is the young girl that is with her?
    
    With many years being apart and so many questions, Derrick and Angela are both desperate for answers that can't come  fast enough.
    
    Derrick is engaged and is to marry Carly in three months.
    
    Are Angela's answers going to change Derrick's mind or will it push him further into his relationship? Or are Angela emotions going to get the best of her and refuse to let Derrick back into her life?

Whiskars Whiskars May 24, 2016 06:13PM
This is messed up it has only been five years. He should not be proposing to another girl.
loveneverend12 loveneverend12 May 06, 2016 04:49AM
You ass that should have been the first sign...GOSH where have all the smart men gone.
sabs829 sabs829 Mar 18, 2016 04:24AM
When you have a guy friend who's one of your closest friend's and you met him in preschool too
                                    
                                    Hopefully he doesn't capture me on my wedding day (hopefully getting married to Derek 😏 ;)) and doesn't commit suicide
If I was their neighbor and I heard their story I would move to another country cause once an OTP always an OTP bish.
sabs829 sabs829 Mar 18, 2016 04:11AM
Do you want readers to correct typos? Or no?
                                    Because I know some authors hate it and I don't want to bother you :)
sabs829 sabs829 Mar 18, 2016 04:21AM
That feeling you get when you read a character's name for the first time and automatically hate them/know you're going to hate them/should hate them
                                    
                                    Sup Carly