Nalu Lemons

Nalu Lemons

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Nalu Forever By niki_nalu_4 Completed

This is the countiuation of what happened in the last chappy of nalu lovestory 

it countains harsh lemons i advise if your in grade 9+ and you are mature enought to read it

and there will be different nalu lemons that i will do for you

-_Koneko_- -_Koneko_- Nov 16
At least if you are gonna make 'uh' a moan,
                              
                              But it like this. "Uh!~" I said drowned out in pleasure.
                              
                              But then again 'Uh' isn't a moan. When you just put. "Uh." With a full stop the reader just reads it out like a normal word.
                              
                              It's awkward then. XD
laci_chan laci_chan Oct 21
Its rated 9th grade and older but yet it looks like it could have been written by a 9 year old
wow, maybe try to have a bit of background story before you do this whole scene
SeaSpawnxD SeaSpawnxD 3 days ago
thats it?? i mean that was nice but....short... I WANT MORE PLOX