The Elementals *In Editing* (#Wattys2016)

The Elementals *In Editing* (#Wattys2016)

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ThatViolaGirl By ThatViolaGirl Completed

How Far Would You Go To Find The Truth?
16 year old Mirabella Marie Sapphire has yet to live a normal life. As her weird dreams come and go her best friend, Lillian, realized  it is time to tell her the truth. Mirabella of course doesn't believe about the Elementals at first. But with another Elemental,a Cursed,and a Fate, Mirabella is sure to believe. But of course,every truth comes with a lie...
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That was really amazing and powerful! The plot of the story is just wow! :O I'll definitely keep on reading! :D
Scripler Scripler Sep 11
Wow this is amazing to far! I'm very impressed, I want to read more it got me completely hooked 👌
LonelyBookWorms LonelyBookWorms Sep 27, 2015
im wondering, if it seems to be talking to Mirabella, why does it say dear whoever instead of dear mirabella?
Untroubledsoul Untroubledsoul Sep 07, 2015
It's intriguing and i love your cover! very catchy. But i'm kind of confused, i guess i have to check out for more :)
WordsLikeRaindrops WordsLikeRaindrops Aug 31, 2015
Good, intriguing start! It's a bit confusing to start off; I wasn't sure what was going on or if the fight scene was a part of the letter, so maybe try to clear that up. :)
FrxxcknBricks FrxxcknBricks Aug 24, 2015
That last sentence though. I am not a big fan of science fiction I must admit but the way this was written may just be enough to change my mind. Great way to start the book I really like it, a diary entry from the past, pretty cool.