If Bites Could Kill...

If Bites Could Kill...

1 Part Story 389 Reads 10 Votes
isa garcia By sisag1990 Updated Apr 29, 2011

There’s a new pack of werewolves in town, but not any town a town ruled by vampires.
Will Isaac and his pack support the hell they’re living in?
Will Lyla and his brother Ax be able to get this pack to leave?
But that’s not the only problem, everything’s about to get messier.

sisag1990 sisag1990 Apr 29, 2011 03:51AM
heyy thank youu guyss... and sorry about the grammer.... im really bad at that!! 
                              and ill up`load next chapter tomorrow!! thankyouu im really excited!
kitty765 kitty765 Apr 29, 2011 03:38AM
It has potential lol n I really like it so far!! UPLOADDD SOON!!! :3 Some gramma mistakes here n there, but it's really good!!
so ill keep reading this, but what you need to know is that when u use words from the 3rd persons point of view, then go bak to first POV it REALLY confuses the reader and makes it hard to keep reading lol, besides that, its very good:D