The Alpha's Chocolate

The Alpha's Chocolate

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cupcakerainbow369 By cupcakerainbow369 Completed

Austin, the new alpha of the Moonshadow pack who took over his father's position. He's cold and ruthless and no one dares to cross his path. Maxine the Sentinel who took over her parents duty 2 days ago. She won't take shit from anyone except her parents and alpha

This outfit is tragic. Sense of style is gone. And what the hell is a burnett
Not that many black girls have long hair. The paragraph was too blunt/ unrealistic.
mizzyremay mizzyremay Jul 08
I feel like naming her wolf is a little unnecessary, you kind have to think who's Scarlet? Oh yeah it's still her.  Which is a little long, no offence :)
Cori1105 Cori1105 Nov 21, 2016
I thought werewolves knew instantly if they are face to face with their mate, not 20 minutes later.🤔
Kdavis06 Kdavis06 Nov 12, 2016
I thought a wolf's mate could just be chosen but there had to be some sort of connection
How_To_Be_A_Fangirl How_To_Be_A_Fangirl Sep 13, 2016
Why y'all always making the short girls get it all. #talllivesmatter