The Elementals Series: Deception

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Janine Mimi De Jesus By janinemimi Updated a month ago
Five years after she disappeared Aubrette Benson returned to Elementare Academy, the most prestigious academy for elementals. With her bi-colored eyes, one green and one blue, she has the ability to control two elements: wind and water. But when she returns she causes a stir. Where has she been? Why did she come back? Where did she learn to be the powerful elemental she is today?
    Along with her return come mysterious deaths all linked back to her. So why is Aubrette Benson back after all these years, and what is her connection to these deaths?
Lovely start. I like the descriptive phrases used. Plus I love how you start the story immediately with the dialogue. Poor Blase. 
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Starts with a bang! Or should I say, gale force wind! The cover grabbed me first, but the prologue blew me away
Extremely descriptive! love it. I just read this prologue and I can't wait to see what the first chapter is going to be like! Seeya! I just have to go to 1st chap now!
I love it! It reminds me of Vampire Academy but it's still very original :)
Great story. I really liked some of the descriptions you gave, very visual!
I can't wait for the sequel to come out! When do you think it will be out?