Ensnaring the Senses

Ensnaring the Senses

28.4K Reads 1.5K Votes 21 Part Story
SM By SecretMai Updated Sep 26, 2015

Potions disaster, a startling revelation, comedy, romance. ss/hg pairings. PG-13. AU after DH, Dumbledore and Snape don't die and 7th years come back to finish school. Slightly OOC. Please comment/review! *Characters are the work of J.K. Rowling, I do not own anything but the plot*

lexbrent4 lexbrent4 Jun 06
I'm a big Harry Potter fan and I found this story really interesting. It's one of the most well written fanfics I've read! Really great 👍🏼
RicaJones27 RicaJones27 Jun 09, 2015
You've got a really good voicing. But I do have a problem with the breaks, just like the others said you split scenes quickly. But other than that this is great. Keep up the good work! :)
rdunk8 rdunk8 Jun 08, 2015
I swear I hope she doesn't fancy Snape, cuz if she does I'm gonna gag. But I'm a Harry potter fan and I did enjoy it, it's weird hearing Dumbledores name again. there was a few grammar errors with the quotations that I caught though
SecretTome SecretTome May 10, 2015
I definitely wasn't expecting this combination, but it's interesting haha. The more than occasional point breaks make it a tiny bit chunky but otherwise it flows really well. Interested to see what's to come!
lvmley lvmley Apr 28, 2015
I've only seen the movies and know Snape to be a 99% mean and 1% kind of nice. I'm finding it really interesting that I'm seeing the 1% of his niceness haha. 
                              
                              But you write so eloquently, the switching from character views is very fluid. No confusion at all! 
                              
                              Good job :)
SecretMai SecretMai Apr 03, 2015
@FaeSparks Completely understand. Very sorry if the pairing doesn't appeal to you, but I hope you'll at least understand why the pair makes sense to me :)