Trust one more time

Trust one more time

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laylalola1 By laylalola1 Completed

Can a broken heart be fixed after being ripped apart from the most dear person to you? Can you trust him again?
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I was in the kitchen making dinner, a knock on the door snapped me out from my trance. I waked to the door whipping my hand with my shirt, I opened the door and froze in my place. My ex husband was in front of me; I lost myself in his eyes, they held so much anger rage hate and pain, I wanted to wipe his pain away but then his words rang in my ears " you're worthless, I hate you and every second I spend with you."
And then my five years son come " mom will you tell me a story?"

stox4story stox4story Jun 27
Storyline is good but needs a good editing for grammar and transitions.
Uh... please improve your grammar. Otherwise, I like your writing style. You're able to convey a lot of feelings. Good chapter!
duchessdome duchessdome Aug 26
Ooo this seems good.. I can't wait to find out what happens next
AlyssaMartinne AlyssaMartinne Jul 10, 2015
i see that no one comments. 
                              btw, its a great book. idk why 
                              but yesterday while reading i cried a lot. dont know why. you are a great writer keep it up!