Stay Beautiful

Stay Beautiful

12.8K Reads 379 Votes 14 Part Story
Rebecca By Birdy_Brain Updated May 20, 2013

Kitty is beautiful both inside and out. 

Without a  harmful bone in her body she is the ideal pacifist, always caring and forever seeing the good in people. So what happens when Kitty finds herself in the company of someone who has very sinister intentions, someone who drags her into a world where beauty is a shade of colour and not a judgement of soul. 

With strange thoughts and feelings streaking through her little body and mind, will Kitty realise that not everything has a good side? 
Will she find a way to escape an underworld system of lies, deceit, sex, forced partnerships, soul-sucking and spell-binding activities? 

Will Kitty survive and most importantly…will she stay beautiful?

justkickingit justkickingit Dec 02, 2012
I like it I don't understand why people would not read it just bc its not right
SparkleSavannah SparkleSavannah Aug 04, 2011
Really good idea going on here.  I like it.  Make the reader bite hard and then cringe by describing sounds, emotions and thoughts without the use of a lot of "ing" verbs.  Those seem to be slowing the pace of the story.  ;)
SarahJay SarahJay Jun 26, 2011
I really want to read this, because it's seems entirely fresh, new, and creepy. But you have so many run-on sentences and grammatical errors that I just can't focus on your words. I'm correcting everything in my head.
                              I'm sorry.
                              But it seems good.
the-liver-is-evil the-liver-is-evil Apr 26, 2011
You paint a good picture of the situation...like it could happen to anyone.  0.0  Nicely done.
asianlah asianlah Apr 25, 2011
wow really an interesting plot. howd you even come up with it? terrific idea, and descriptions so far. x voted 
PinkAlienSpace PinkAlienSpace Apr 25, 2011
The beginning really captured my attention.i'm really liking it so far. ^_^