Fairy tail fanfiction :3
That's right! Suck it Erza! 😏😏😉
It's good.. sadly it's confusing... I can't recognize which part Reader talks or thinks
This is really good BUT I wish that my dialogue was also in quotes
Every time I read 'lets get down to business' I always think of Mulan... lets get down to business to defeat the huns!
Its so annoying! I had to read this part 3 times until my brain decided to stop singing it.
Oh and I live the story so far!!!
It's really hard to tell when the reader is supposed to talk. I have to re-read a few times because I cannot understand what is talking and what is not.
I value your story, author-chan. I do so hope you can amuse me with another chapter.