Dear Amna [Untold Words and Some Burning Thoughts]

Dear Amna [Untold Words and Some Burning Thoughts]

24.7K Reads 1.3K Votes 14 Part Story
Alejandra Feliciano By lightinherveins Completed

So this is where everything goes down. 

When the mind screams for freedom but the heart won’t let go from the key. When the imprisoned and innocent captive doesn't have more space available for all his painful memories and needs to breathe again in open spaces. However, the prisoner cannot get rid of the memories while the heart clutches the key like it’s the only thing worth living for. Who can judge him? He beats for that key. What he doesn't know yet is that if he holds it for much longer, it will only end in his shattering and the mind’s suffocation.

Acleoxus Acleoxus Feb 12, 2016
"this is not a story, but sometimes I wish it was" I have a feeling this book will tear me apart.
chip1232 chip1232 Apr 13, 2015
Wow this sounds amazing
                              I mean, even the introduction was stunning!
bookbountiful bookbountiful Nov 22, 2014
okay. first off.
                              
                              THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL INTRODUCTION. so don't undermine yourself.
                              
                              second. yes, you have every right to let the thoughts in your mind out onto this website. so good for you! you go!
                              
                              third. You seem very cool. :) 
                              
                              bye XD
RiyaK512 RiyaK512 Nov 02, 2014
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. 
                              So deep! It makes the soul if the reader drown.  You have a way with words. :) WOW
ineffablesoul ineffablesoul Oct 27, 2014
Alejandra, you really have a way with words. How you construct every sentence of your thoughts is so beautiful.
dearamna dearamna Oct 11, 2014
such an utterly perfect introduction and im already weeping with excitement x