Speak Up

Speak Up

3.1K Reads 21 Votes 11 Part Story
Dalisoul By Dalisoul Updated Jan 06, 2011

Charmaine is a normal, christian teenage girl living in London. She's in love with the 'bad boy', Tony but he's not really that bad, it's just an act. But being in love also has its dangers. Being so in love, you'd do ANYTHING for him. What happens when pregnancy comes in between them

Dalisoul Dalisoul Dec 05, 2010
@unbelieve Great idea; i'll consider that. Thank you very much :-)
Dalisoul Dalisoul Dec 05, 2010
@kimmylove94 Thank you. Let me know what you think on the other chapters xx
unbelieve unbelieve Nov 28, 2010
Hey, still liking it a lot, but maybe you could put a little more in about Charmaine's family, you know?  A little more background on her life outside Tony, and why he chose an unpopular girl to date.  
unbelieve unbelieve Nov 28, 2010
Yes, it's quite good.  Nice pacing.  Keep it moving!  I'd love to read more.
Dalisoul Dalisoul Jul 06, 2010
@Smokey101 Thank you. Not very popular though :-D. Please spread it around. It would be great if people told me what they think, good or bad
Smokey101 Smokey101 Jul 05, 2010
wow. x-rated. tony sounds hot too. u shud get more recognition! dnt knoe bout otha ppl but i enjoyd it pretti much. cant wait to find out more
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