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His Experiment [FIRST EDIT]

His Experiment [FIRST EDIT]

114K Reads 6.7K Votes 27 Part Story
Tala By TalatheWolf Completed

The world took a turn for the better. There were less problems, less diseases, and less to worry about. Or that's what He told her.      
Experiment Arcelia 14786 was His favorite. She was so vital to the Lab she inhabited that they painted her door blue instead of the sterile white that plastered everything else. She knew all the passcodes and looked down submissively. She was the perfect experiment because of Him.        
But when He brings in a new experiment from the Outside called Experiment Varian, she finds herself experiencing change whether she likes it or not. And it's all because of Experiment Varian, the only other one to accept the Red Virus Trial besides Arcelia herself.       
Unlike the passive Arcelia, Varian isn't going to let the Lab take him down.        
Editor: DanaScully        Book Cover: etherealinsanity

DarkerGrey DarkerGrey Jun 14, 2016
I can't help picturing him as an old guy and this is so creepy
helianthus3 helianthus3 Jul 18, 2016
he was somewhat charming a couple seconds ago... But now, I don't like this guy o.o
StrawberryDonut08 StrawberryDonut08 Nov 15, 2016
ya know there's a disorder that causes the person to not feel pain, but since they can't feel pain, they don't know how fatal an injury can be until:
                              A.) They go to the ER just in time 
                              B.) They die
anotherdreamer anotherdreamer Nov 15, 2016
I love love love thissssss. I could easily say thisis my favorite
rewriteyourdestiny rewriteyourdestiny May 23, 2016
this is getting really disturbing 😖 its a good story so far tho
ferngullyzzee ferngullyzzee Jan 03, 2016
Ugh I'm kinda wondering how old he is compared to her? Idk. Anyways your book is so interesting I'm looking forward to it!