How you changed my life

How you changed my life

1K Reads 3 Votes 9 Part Story
subb By xxSayArt97xx Updated May 21, 2011

Heaven and Neveah, two twins that seek for fun and love life. They go through some thing that no one can imagine why. Secrets are becoming known to some of them, and some people just aren't that good in their life. What will life cause to them and will they be strong enough to face it?

TheMightyPen TheMightyPen May 22, 2011
There was a little bit too much POV shifting and flashbacks for me. It made this chapter a bit overwhelming! But this was still an enjoyable read, and I really hope you continue. Voted! 
xxSayArt97xx xxSayArt97xx Apr 12, 2011
@murderdoller0000 Thanks for the comment :D and nope you didn't sound mean lol, I love feedback on this story, since its a first story so yeah. Thanks again :D