edward leaves bella after a month jasper follows a pull and leads to bella
Please use grammar. But I love the story! I just find it hard to tell when anyone is talking
I love it already, but i have advice- you should add quotation marks. It's kinda hard for me to read.
please when you write a story can you please use speech marks as it is so anoying when they are missing.
it's ok it was an awesome update and plz update sooon again plz plz plz plz
plz update it`s good and your a great writer a read all your books plz update