Faithful

Faithful

1.9K Reads 70 Votes 4 Part Story
Shay-lee By LaLaLa95 Updated Jul 03, 2011

"Some secrets have the power to destroy."

Faith Winter had it all. Untill the car crash that ruined her life and killed her mother. After that tragic day, Faith began to change. Little does Faith know, her mother had been hiding horrible and dark secrets. Secrets that Faith should have known and secrets that have the answer to all of her newly developed probelms. Secrets that hide clues to discovering what she is. secrets that have the power to change the world... Somebody else knows what the secret is however. Will he will use that and Faiths ignorance to try to transfrom her into the monster her mother had tried so hard to prevent her from becoming? Or will a long lasting love stop him from meddling with destiny..

  • boots
  • boy
  • daughter
  • eyes
  • faith
  • magic
  • psychic
  • scared
  • secrets
  • sense
ImJustOneGirl ImJustOneGirl May 02, 2011
this is described very well and the way you write is very beautiflul xxx
Etcetera Etcetera May 01, 2011
OOOOooooOOOO! ;D Great description. Gonna read chapter 1 now.
AlishaMar AlishaMar May 01, 2011
aside from a few grammar mistakes, (but we all make them!!) its brilliant!
AlishaMar AlishaMar May 01, 2011
I really like the opening, it lures you in :D and i can wait to read more!
BrionyHeneberry BrionyHeneberry Apr 29, 2011
I really like the concept of this, but I do have one piece of advice. 
                              
                              In the first three paragraphs you use 'emotion' five times (assuming that I can count). You have mixed it up here and there with 'feeling(s)' but that also seemed a little repetitive.
                              
                              Your thesaurus is your best friend!
sperare sperare Apr 29, 2011
This wasn't a disappointment after the great start! :D Your writing is great.