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Twinkle By twimis23 Completed

Becky and Luke are the picture perfect couple . However things change after their marriage, their life becomes a bumpy ride and they have arguments almost daily . 

But on the day of their anniversary when Luke returns with gifts and goes to get freshened up, Becky receives a call from a police officer , who informs her that her husband had died in a major car crash few minutes ago.

She couldn't believe it.

How was that possible?

But then there is a saying that the soul of a person comes to meet a loved one before it leaves !!!!!!!!!!!!

So was Luke really dead and this was his soul who had come to mend things with Becky, so that it could rest in peace?
Or was the person who came, an imposer or a criminal ?
It's for you to figure out ...

  • adventure
  • english
  • mystery
  • secondchances
  • shortstory
  • suspense
  • thriller
ganymeda26 ganymeda26 Jul 16, 2015
it's good but  just I think it lacks the chemistry. I guess you can explore more on the main character feelings so it gives the vibe
MacJanny MacJanny Nov 12, 2014
had a feeling the family background was from India. Looking forward to the rest :)
avi-diewert avi-diewert Oct 26, 2014
Aww! Luv u bestie<3 And ur welcome<3 Thanks for the detication ^.^
mistrygjm mistrygjm Oct 16, 2014
Update asap. Great story. I cant wait to c whts gonna happen. N u should definitely update sooner. As all of your readers like me are desperately waiting ;)
I really like this book have you read my book the fault in our stars
twimis23 twimis23 Oct 08, 2014
dont worry @JoanneWeaver . I will update my books soon . even I am a reader and I hate waiting for updating . its d worst . I just hope other people like tge story