NEW: Introducing Tap. Addictive chat stories for your 📲 Now in 10 languages
Daughter of Poseidon { book 1/2 of the Poseidon books}

Daughter of Poseidon { book 1/2 of the Poseidon books}

28K Reads 772 Votes 14 Part Story
BlueFoodz By BlueFoodz Completed

My name is Summer Jackson and I'm  Percy Jackson's long lost little sister, I was kidnapped when I was 4 by khione because she was mad that my dad Poseidon had another child with the same mortal. So mad that every day she hurts me with ice and snow.
But that all changed when Percy decided to visit Quebeck ...

A LOT of miss spellings, I already know so please don't tell me
Book 1/2: the book your reading 
Book 1: Daughter of Poseidon- rewrite 
Book 2: The return

I'm liking the begging. Someone changed the north winds purple? I love Demi-Gods!! 😄
It's a decent start. I can definitely picture it, but add more sensory detail and emotional detail. It's hard, but I believe in you.
BlueFoodz BlueFoodz Sep 04, 2016
I said it in the discussion 
                              There are a lot of miss spellings 
                              Please deal with it
hulloitmeh hulloitmeh Jul 07, 2016
The only thing I thaught of when I read 'hurd' is that it rhymes with turd 😓