Fatty Me

Fatty Me

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Jordan Hanley By TheUltimateFatMan Completed

Cover Created By: @WickedLovely001
    
    Authors Note: this is about my journey through my weight loss. Drop a comment once you've read. this is not a joke poem! i can tell when people haven't read this by adding, lol's and lmao's to their comments. there's no humour in this. This is me putting my whole heart out on the line.
    
     
    
    Looking in the mirror, what do I see?
    
    All I see, is that fatty me
    
    
    Living in darkness, hiding from the light
    
    The fear of their glances gives me a fright
    
    I want to be alone
    
    In the darkness, of my own home
    
    Eating my pain away
    
    Bite by bite, hoping for this to be the last day
    
    
    Please make this pain end
    
    I can't live life in this body that will not mend
    
    My hope has become weary, As my eyes become teary
    
    
    Fat, fat, fat, they scream at me
    
    I don't know where to go, they're all around, staring at me
    
    They hate me, for what I am
    
    I hate me, for what I am
    
    I want it to be done
    
    This existence, is anything but fun
    
    
    Darkness...
    
    Looking in the mirror, what do I see?
    ...

Wow. I didn't know you could write a poem! :) *hug* hope things are better for you dude. :(
niomiekitten niomiekitten Aug 11, 2015 06:59AM
I always feel this way almost every time I look in the mirror .when I go outside I feel like everyone is looking at me and judging me. I don't even like going outside .i just don't like me
Aabirah Aabirah Jun 24, 2015 08:53PM
That last line was touching. You now see the real inner you, and not what you used to objectify yourself. You the person and not the size.
AkiraWolf_9 AkiraWolf_9 May 14, 2015 12:51AM
That's the most beautiful thing I've read in a long time, even better than the classically famous poems school fed to us.
KyannaKitt KyannaKitt Apr 15, 2015 01:50AM
It takes a lot to talk about the things that pain us. Bravo.