your just not her

your just not her

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Marguena Dorceus By MarguenaDorceus Updated Feb 16

HELLO THIS IS JUST SOMETHING THAT HAS BEEN BREWING ON MY MIND SINCE FOREVER NOW HOPE U LIKE IT! THIS IS WHAT I THINK EMILY SHOULD LOOK LIKE. WELL VOTE. COMMENT. AND ENJOY!

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Michael's P.O.V:

1st day of senior year and i was ready to take on the world.

    I rolled onto school grounds on my motorcycle feeling all eyes on me.
      I smirked.

           as always 

   I took off my helmet and ran my hands through my hair scanning the parking lot for my best friend. 

   I saw a blonde just standing there with her friends just gaping at me, much like the whole school. I winked at her sending her my trademark smirk as i got off my motorcycle.

     I swear i saw her fake faint but i just ignored that thought as i spotted my best friend drive in his spot.

    I took a step towards his sleek red jaguar but stopped when something caught my eyes....or should i say someone?

   She had long blond hair that stopped at her waist.
          i couldn't see the color of her eyes but ...

    MarguenaDorceus MarguenaDorceus Aug 20, 2015
    wow thank you so much and i know i have to work on editing but i can never focus on that after writing so i just edit when im done with the book but thank you so much for ur comment i will take it into consideration and be on the look out. @CritiqueMePlease