Defiant

Defiant

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Aspiring Author By TaylorJones125 Completed

This is how I think Allegiant should have ended. They deserved a life. And family. They went through too much. So here is my idea of how it should have ended:
Tris prior survived the weapons lab and tobias saved her. What will they do now? Will they live in peace now that the factions have been reinstated? What happens when a new group called the defiant start preparing fOr a war? The friends and family they thought dead start showing up alive. How? Who else is alive? What happens when a little bit of family shows up in tobias' life. What happens when a girl shows up tris never thought she would meet? Can they really trust the defiant? What will tris and Tobias do now that they also have a family to look after. Can they ever really be safe? 

All rights to Veronica Roth. I don't own any of the characters or ideas.

moosterfur moosterfur Nov 11
I love this book but everyone is very open and says what's on their mind
LifeasTris LifeasTris Apr 03
His worst fear came to life, losing Tris.
                              Too many feels and tiers.
                              I'm going to go and jump over a cliff now bye.
moosterfur moosterfur Nov 11
It would be cool if that doctor was the guy watching the screens that day so he would and it would make a bit more sense
Oliver0309 Oliver0309 Jul 12
Four: hey, will you marry me?
                              *pushes tris off the Ferris wheel
                              Me: of course tobias! I would be so happy too!
Dramatic Irony: A type of irony in books and movies in which the audience knows information the characters don't that is needed to move the plot along.
ALL BECAUSE OF MARCUS. If he didn't train Tobias, we would know what factions he would have aptitude before