Returned But Broken

Returned But Broken

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insecure cupcake By overthinkerr_ Completed

I'm Rosette, I was captured when I was two taken from my parents and locked in a room.  Vampires are who took me, how would I know because I'm a wolf and it's all obvious to me.  This is my story of how I was saved by a alpha, who happened to be my mate. Where I was found, returned, but left completely broken.

EDITING- I am in the process of editing this book.  So sorry if it's kind of bad!

  • adventure
  • capture
  • captured
  • hope
  • love
  • mates
  • vampires
  • wolf
music_may87 music_may87 Jul 01
Ok, I'm 14 and thus honestly makes me feel crappy about myself. I'm a potato compared to her
Casper5660 Casper5660 Apr 23
Personally, I think it would've been more interesting to describe the rescue, like how they killed the vampires or how they got in, and the struggle or whatever, but it's a good start :)
living-the- living-the- Apr 27, 2016
I'm sorry but I kind of can figure out how this story will be maybe you should a few details and don't reveal everything
karlyg13 karlyg13 Mar 28, 2016
This book is a little rushed and could use more detail. This is just a little constructive criticism so please don't take it the wrong way
NotAnAverageSavage NotAnAverageSavage Aug 22, 2016
It would be creepier if they all said "We've been waiting for you. " in that creepy, raspy voice that you hear in horror movies.
From experience I can tell you that that isn't a normal reaction for seeing your family after so many years. When I first saw my family after so long I couldn't stand to be in the same room as them and I always wanted to runaway