Fairy Tail Beach Party (NaLu, GaLe, GrUvia, RoWen, MiraXus, JeRza)

Fairy Tail Beach Party (NaLu, GaLe, GrUvia, RoWen, MiraXus, JeRza)

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Diya By wildlionlife Updated Oct 27, 2014

Okay guys so I'm writing a new fan fic but like the name describes it this story is essentially about fairy tail and the beach but there will also be at the begining some action fights...Lucy will become stronger during that periode 

I hope you like the story



Lucy's P.O.V

'Three days after the GMG'

I walked over to masters office, i had taken my descition there was no turning back now. I knocked on the door and waited

"Come in" I heard, I slowly oppened the door and went in with a sad expretion

"What's wrong my child ?" Master asked

I put on a brave face and said "Master i wish to leave fairy tail", This shocked him

"Why, my child ?", he asked/screamed

"I wanna become stronger so that i won't need to be the princess that needs saving" i replied

"My child you are already strong, but if that is what you wish than let it be so", he answered while removing my guild mark. I nodded an...

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Why Laxus is she like his younger sister in this fanfic or naw?
Oh my god Natsu and Gray aren’t fighting again EVERYONE RUN FOR YOUR LIVES ITS THE END OF THE WORLD AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did anyone notice that in the last two paragraphs the story went haywire? I was like WOW, THAT DEFINITELY ESCALATED QUICKLY!
Me: *crying loudly and screaming after reading a really sad fanfiction*
OrangeRock OrangeRock Nov 27
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It's really good! But I don't know where the sentences start and end... And where their thoughts start and begin. Could you maybe use italics? Or maybe use more puncuation?