Vampire Love (Under Major reconstruction & On Hold)

Vampire Love (Under Major reconstruction & On Hold)

8.2K Reads 25 Votes 6 Part Story
Asandra By ErzaSlayyzz247 Updated Jun 09

A girl loses her parents at the age 11 to a Vampire and is now living at her rich Aunt's house. It has been 5 years since she has see that vampire and vows to hunt him down. She is now 16 and meets a vampire and falls in love.Now she is on the look out for the vampire who killed her parents and she is using her boyfriend to find out some information of that vampire who killed her parents. Will she find the vampire who killed her parents. Or will she take the dangerous journey  for nothing and die.

MaryRoyce MaryRoyce May 25, 2011
I think vampires are the most romantic creatures--I don't know what it is about them, they just are. I especially love Dracula, (Bram Stoker's to be exact) <3
its_nicki_babe its_nicki_babe Oct 10, 2010
amazing!! i love this story out of all the ones you've posted! plz keep writing more and more oh and btw i posted a story earlier plz read it. you probably remember it but i added to it.
Rawr_x Rawr_x Oct 04, 2010
Yeahh it's good. Just might need to proof read it to check punctuation etc..Wait stufff that! Your having fun right? This ain't school. Soo...Write, Enjoy it! Have fun! XD 
LZ-2011 LZ-2011 Sep 16, 2010
I don't like how you go from 1st person prospective the 3rd person prospective it makes it harder to understand without changing the chapter or telling the readers
ErzaSlayyzz247 ErzaSlayyzz247 Jul 02, 2010
@FNWood you are right well i already posted chapter 1 so i will try to make it hard to predict what is going to happen but interesting to it get's bettet at the end  though