The Thieves of Otar

The Thieves of Otar

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Lindsey By AnnabethC Completed

When six-year-old Zia's life is saved from her abusive father by a poor farmer, her life takes a wild turn. Her father faces a trial and is condemned to death, but just as the executioner is about to end his life, he slips away. Now, twelve years later, Zia is still haunted by the thought of her father coming back to hurt her.








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Her father is a monster! Oh.. Hang on Zia. Help is on the way.
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Mbabaoye Mbabaoye Feb 08
Strong start. As a fellow writer of fantasy I am very interested to see where this one goes :)
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