I'm Not Cinderella - I'm Chloe

I'm Not Cinderella - I'm Chloe

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Brooke•ᴥ• By brookekd Updated Sep 28, 2015

*PREVIOUSLY CALLED: Chloe*
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"I'll never be good enough," I cried, salty tears falling down my cheeks.

He grabbed my face in his hands, kissing away my tears. 

"You're perfect to me."

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One evil sister and one heartless mother. Sound somewhat familiar? Well, meet Chloe Pickett, our sort-of Cinderella. She's an ordinary girl with stellar grades and a love for John Green books. Chloe's used to being forgotten; with a sister who rules the school, it's practically impossible not to be. Having a sister who has everything she doesn't (popularity, tons of friends, looks of a goddess) makes it hard for her to stay positive. Her own mother treats her like a slave, causing Chloe to live in a world of torment and endless hurt.

With a heart of gold and fierce determination (as well as devilishly handsome looks), Tyler Adams is our maybe Prince Charming. Most would look at him and assume he's the typical bad boy. Well, they couldn't be more wrong. He doesn't do drugs or drive a badass motorcycle. He doesn't party or have slutty one night stands. He's just Tyler, and he's got a soft spot in him, which is why he immediately takes an interest in the broken girl. Will he be the one to end her pain? Will she be willing to give her heart away again?

With evil sisters, crazy ex-boyfriends, and selfish mothers trying to stand in their way, it seems impossible the two will ever make it through. However, Chloe's not some damsel in distress. She's got some determination of her own that is waiting to be released. So when her world begins to spin out of control - Prince Charming or not - she is ready to take control of her life. 

She's not Cinderella...she's Chloe.

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MaybeTomorrow4310 MaybeTomorrow4310 Apr 16, 2015
I can tell already your writings super good!! I haven't even started to read your book and I'm hooked! That and I'm a sucker for anything remotely like a disney princess story, It sounds really good! :DD
brookekd brookekd Feb 10, 2015
@flaurel oh my god that's perfect. I'm totally using  that. Look out for a dedication on my next chapter lol
florallist florallist Feb 08, 2015
This book is going to be so awesome! Just the intro alone go tme hooked! Also, I love how you write a story based on a song, really inspires me to do that myself sometime :)
impediments impediments Feb 05, 2015
Hey, thanks for dedicating! It really was no problem :) I shall certainly follow this book and read along!
Nafla3 Nafla3 Jan 25, 2015
I am not familiar with the song, but your blurb is pretty good. There are a few sentences which I would change and attach the with the previous or the following, and some punctuation to be added, but nevertheless, a good intro and description.
brookekd brookekd Sep 22, 2014
@quirkycookie_x thank you so much! I'm so glad people are actually excited for it! I hope to update it within the next few days :)