Divergent no war

Divergent no war

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divergent_fanfics_ By divergent_fanfics_ Updated Apr 02

Tris and the gang have a life at dauntless have no war and the war between erudite and abnegation never happened. However, is Tris's choice as dauntless leader a good one?

What if she said no! Lol that would be funny if she was looking for a shirt and it's at Tobias's!
- - Mar 26
AGE IS JUST A NUMBER I mean the love of my life is 30years old
kazzykatt kazzykatt Dec 29, 2015
Age is just a number I'm in love wit a 30 yro who doesn't know I exist
k_joy1 k_joy1 Dec 24, 2015
It makes sense that she wouldn't just say yes cuz they've only been together like 4 days and she's only 16 (don't tell me age don't matter in dauntless Idc) but she shouldn't just walk out like wth
k_joy1 k_joy1 Dec 24, 2015
Just a tip, you should use a bit more variety, cuz you've really only used "said/says" and spit
k_joy1 k_joy1 Dec 24, 2015
I wonder if tobias would have been a dauntless leader if there wasn't a war, cuz then all the things he said about not wanting to be their pon and knowing about the war would all be gone...