Say Something

Say Something

11.3K Reads 835 Votes 30 Part Story
❝mcdreamy❞ By guyswithguitars Updated Jun 25

❝some d e s t i n i e s
          a r e   j u s t
               false c o i n c i d e n c e s ❞
    
    
    "Take it."
    
    "What?" I reply with a shrug. She surely knows that Hollywood is at the other end of this continent.
    
    "This opportunity comes once in a lifetime." She replies with a soft voice and a disconcerted tone.
    
    My eyes flicker as I touch her face smoothly with the freezing water. "Maybe you also come once in a lifetime." 
    
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    A skilled drummer who has pathetic worthless life gave the chance on trying to mingle with his alternate world with the acoustic lover wherein he chose to believe he can let her go but instead she's the one who can't let him go.
    
    Highest Ranking: Chicklit #317
    cover by @-bIurryface
    trailer by  @carpe-di3m and @sunflowerin

  • acoustic
  • dream
  • drums
  • guitars
  • illusion
  • inception
  • life
  • live
  • love
  • music
  • pain
  • problems
  • reality
  • stay
  • teens
  • today
writtenbyH writtenbyH May 13, 2016
WOAH. What if she really was just an illusion? This is the first of this kind that I will read. Very interesting.
HayRJ17 HayRJ17 May 12, 2016
The beginning is very intriguing and capture my attention, very good writing skills
Wintersbooks46 Wintersbooks46 Mar 21, 2016
This is amazing and beautiful. I never came across a story like yours before and it's very igniting. I fell in love with ut already.
CailinSpraoi CailinSpraoi Mar 18, 2016
I'm so sorry it took me this long to get around to commenting, but I was extremely busy. This looks amazing so far! I love the summary, and I love the quote. I may actually keep that quote in mind. The story seems mysterious, and the summary is well written.  Can't wait to read on! :)
AuteurZ AuteurZ Mar 22, 2016
Very amazing summary, definitely make me extremely curious.. like i have to continue to read it right now. if she's just an illusion isn't that going to be really sad? but i love a story with nice twist so this is really great :)
Forever_Yours_Too Forever_Yours_Too Sep 16, 2015
There was one grammar mistake but I hardly even saw it. I especially loved the quote about the acoustic vs. drummer <3