Life's Game

Life's Game

56K Reads 234 Votes 37 Part Story
prncess4lyfe By prncess4lyfe Updated Aug 07

Kayla is a young girl, raised in the hood & most definetley doesn't like that she's stereotyped as being loud & nasty. She moves out of the hood and realizes maybe the hood was much better than all the trials and tribulations she's going to face along her journey to proving she can be successful but will she forget the hood is always in you no matter what.......

Ivyboo Ivyboo Mar 02, 2012
I love ur story and i see you read My Urban story i love that story also but the girl that wrote it wont write anymore until she gets 5 comments and fans hope u can help wit dhat plzzz
prncess4lyfe prncess4lyfe Aug 02, 2011
@Kennymac31 thanks I'm not a professional I do make mistakes, & there's a reason why the title is " my ghetto life" know the saying judge a book by it's cover
Kennymac31 Kennymac31 Aug 01, 2011
Your writing needs to be improved. But so far so good. Keep it up. With practice you can become better. However next time opt for a less Cheesy title as the one you have chosen.
Nykedra Nykedra Jan 29, 2011
i really like where your headed with this story i just wish youd do more showing than telling. like instead of telling how the boy asked for kylas numbr show  him actualli sayin it ( use more dialogue)  
BMccoullum BMccoullum Jul 30, 2010
Not bad. . it just needs more monologue. You have what I don't and I have what you don't I tend to be a little less descriptive. Yours has no action...