Losielette And the Boy With The Mechanical Heart (Watty2015)

Losielette And the Boy With The Mechanical Heart (Watty2015)

65 Part Story 219K Reads 7.1K Votes
Danni Allan By x_Luminous_x Updated Feb 05

Losielette is a quiet girl living in 1924, whose life is comfortable, yet dull. That is, until she's kidnapped by a rogue time traveller  on the night of her wedding.
    Her captor is a dark-haired, wild looking boy with eyes like ice, and a personality to match. He's ruthless, stubborn, does what ever he pleases, and will stop at nothing to try and break Losielette's spirits.
    The only thing she knows about him? He's on the run from the law and faces a possible death sentence if he's caught. Other than that, he refuses to tell her even what his real name is. 
    When she finds herself pulled into his life of crime, her life becomes chaotically action packed. Accompanied by a quirky pink-haired girl, and a boy so handsome he can hypnotize people with his looks, the four of them travel through the plains of time, running from who ever or whatever wants her kidnapper dead.
    
    But as a girl from the roaring twenties, and hundreds upon hundreds between her and her captor,  how can she see cope with travelling through time into worlds which she should have never even  lived to see?
    
    Current cover by @weeknder

1DewDrop 1DewDrop Mar 27, 2016 04:08AM
What?!?! Dude! She still has a life ahead of her and you want her to marry?!
xxnikkiii xxnikkiii Jul 25, 2015 07:03PM
When reading this line I thought of the song 'Hold on We're Going Home' lol.
LittleCinnamon LittleCinnamon Dec 31, 2014 10:28AM
Agree with Katrin on this one, it's really not flowery at all. It was a great start - slap bang right into the action and already encouraging some sympathy for your main character and sneakily getting everyone to root for her 
HamdiyaSufi HamdiyaSufi Dec 25, 2014 12:44AM
Btw I was real fond of your old cover with the pink font, why'd change it, i mean this own is nice but the old one grew on me  and I seriously need to catch up on this story
MomoMonster01 MomoMonster01 Dec 20, 2014 08:31PM
How did you come up with this idea? I guess what I mean to ask is what was your inspiration?
Hooked from the first chapter ❤❤❤❤ I'm in love so far!