We all know that Disneyland is the happiest place on earth. And some of us know that the Matterhorn may have a basketball court at the highest part. But. You're. WRONG. So then what's up there?
@Fallenangel100 THANK YOU! You just made my day :) Man I thought I did something wrong because of that comment below, but man thanks! You seriously made Christmas better! Merry Christmas!
I LOVED THE PROLOGUE. i didn't notice any spelling mistakes. ummm...i guess that all.
the story was very engaging.
Loads of action in the prologue! Great start! It's intriguing and makes, me, a reader, want more :D
This is very well done and original! It makes me have goosebumps! ^.^
@TheWittyUsernameGirl Ah thanks so much! Haha and it's alright. And man I have so many thoughts buzzing around in my head it's not even funny
@pure-heart OMG. Thank you so much!! You don't know how much I appreciate this comment!!! AHHHH <3 Man all I gotta say is to just write for your life, have fun, and if you can't come up with anything free write and use that for some ideas =)