Sweet Summer (Pause)

Sweet Summer (Pause)

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Maritza By Love_Maritza Updated Jan 23, 2011

Christie is a fifteen year old girl living with her mother. Before school ends, she gets a letter from her father inviting her to stay with him for one summer at the beach house. The last time she's seen him was right before he left her and her Mom. Christie starts to get weird powers and wonders what they are. Maybe its something her Dad has to do with it...

ACRL37 ACRL37 May 09, 2011
aw it sounds like a sweet story. I would just use a bit more description and its structured a bit weird..the sentences don't go all the way to the other end of the box..but other than that, nice job! =) 
Confiantexetxbelle Confiantexetxbelle May 09, 2011
This is good a little improvement would be great but it's awesome. Voted!
TheRealWizard TheRealWizard Oct 04, 2010
this is a really good story please upload soon!!!!!!! LUV YA!!!!!!!!!!!