it sounds great and even if it have error people will understand dont worry bout these others giving you a hard tome I have errors in my books so what I continue to write
There are many grammar errors here and the summary doesn't make much sense. It just needs editing that's all
@tamarajramadan its a fun book ok nd nd i read your lil book what is that 4 parts okay now
If youre actually proud of this, you should read an actual book. This doesnt have a point. It doesn't teach anyone anything. Its just you cursing and using bad grammar
im sorry but i find this repetitive, overused, and generally stupid
HOW THE HELL DO STORIES LIKE THIS GET SO MANY READS. HAVE YOU SEEN THE COVER? HAVE YOU READ IT?