Spider Bites Are Supposed to Give You Super Powers

Spider Bites Are Supposed to Give You Super Powers

714 Reads 31 Votes 5 Part Story
laughthencarryon By laughthencarryon Updated Oct 12, 2012

A story a highs and lows, ups and downs, triumph and failed attemps, but mostly the story of Jessimen Upton, a girl who's life was turned upside down after one little run in with a spider. Sorry for the overly dramatic description! Read ;)

madamFinch madamFinch Jan 04, 2015
I love keeper too! I want to either become one professionally or be a writer
ZsaYad ZsaYad Oct 23, 2012
I liked your first chapter. Definitely reading on. Your intro before teh first chapter could use some work though. You might want to leave out who this character is entirely until you get into the story. The intro is to entice your reader.
Twilightsinsanefan10 Twilightsinsanefan10 Oct 11, 2012
This is So cool. I really like'd the prologue it sucked me right in. Very detailed. Keep up the good work, and good luck on your book. :) 
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