Spider Bites Are Supposed to Give You Super Powers

Spider Bites Are Supposed to Give You Super Powers

5 Part Story 713 Reads 31 Votes
laughthencarryon By laughthencarryon Updated Oct 12, 2012

A story a highs and lows, ups and downs, triumph and failed attemps, but mostly the story of Jessimen Upton, a girl who's life was turned upside down after one little run in with a spider. Sorry for the overly dramatic description! Read ;)

madamFinch madamFinch Jan 04, 2015 08:31PM
I love keeper too! I want to either become one professionally or be a writer
ZsaYad ZsaYad Oct 23, 2012 08:03AM
I liked your first chapter. Definitely reading on. Your intro before teh first chapter could use some work though. You might want to leave out who this character is entirely until you get into the story. The intro is to entice your reader.
This is So cool. I really like'd the prologue it sucked me right in. Very detailed. Keep up the good work, and good luck on your book. :) 
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