The Heiress

The Heiress

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Clarin Dy By keshhh Completed

“You have to break up with him.”  Those seven simple words ruined Claire’s dream of having a fairy-tale love story. She was sure that Jake Evans was “The One”. But the only thing that was stopping her from getting that fairytale love story that she had always dreamed of is Jake's not rich.  Claire Harper is the daughter, and therefore heiress of, one of the richest men in America. She could have anything in the world that she wanted- except Jake Evans. Her parents don’t accept Jake because he is not of “the higher class”. Claire is forced to choose between love and her parents’ wishes- either finish her relationship or make Jake suffer to no end. After the break up, Claire moved to New York, under her parents’ demands. She studied there for two years. Now, she’s finally back in Los Angeles, and will be starting her senior year at Canyon High- the school Jake goes to. Little did she know, Jake is not the guy she fell in love with two years ago. He’s changed. But what happens when the two see each other again? Are the feelings that they had two years ago still there? After all, every girl has that one boy that she'll never lose feelings for.

Sullivanaa Sullivanaa Oct 25, 2013
Very interesting prologue, i could already predict im gonna get hooked for sure❤
patismyname patismyname Feb 08, 2013
This is a really good prologue. It's short but you could already tell that this story will be a fantastic one. Will read the next chapter nooow. :) Voted for this!!
MiloBeMyBaby MiloBeMyBaby Feb 07, 2013
I love your cover and this is such an awesome story...will read more... :D
Alarac Alarac Feb 07, 2013
You have a really interesting writing style and for once good grammar as well. There are a few things (more like one), but it's just punctuation. Even though it's a prologue, it has good flow and structure. I can't wait for the rest of it. 
                              
                              Thank you for writing your story and sharing it with us.
keshhh keshhh Feb 06, 2013
@RonJAguirre Thanks! :)
                              @carikitty I smiled at your comment, thank you so much, that's so sweet of you. :)
AaronJamez AaronJamez Feb 06, 2013
It's an interesting story :) I will try to read it till it ends. :) Wonderful story indeed. 
                              
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