Rewind Park

Rewind Park

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KraigC By KraigC Completed

"I've been living an illusion.

And I don't mean that in the usual soap-opera-y way most people do when they say something as  dramatic as 'I've been living an illusion.' I haven't discovered my lover's been cheating on me, or that my Dad secretly works for the FBI, or that my school is full of vampires, or anything stupid like that...

I really mean it. 

I've been living in some real-life "Twilight Zone" bullshit. And I don't know how long I've been here- maybe my entire life.

Everything I do. Everywhere I go. Everyone I talk to... All of it's suspect. All of it's part of some grand illusion.

Even my girlfriend acts like she's in on it.

And that sucks, because I really like my girlfriend." -Eugene X

Follow struggling musician Eugene X as he descends down the most unlikely of rabbit-holes in the often-surprising "REWIND PARK."  

(Thanks for reading! I appreciate all comments and stars!)

  • losangeles
  • love
  • lovestory
  • music
  • portlandoregon
  • punk
  • rabbithole
  • rock
  • rockstars
  • timetravel
  • train
  • vacation
pilotmuk19 pilotmuk19 Apr 16, 2015
You have a wonderful way of framing your sentences. The best part it was Science fiction and yet felt so real like it could really happen to someone. I really enjoyed it. Adding it to my library and will keep giving further feed backs as i keep reading ahead. Good job.
DavinaG DavinaG Mar 06, 2015
I'm so happy I found this! Stylistically you do so many fun things that I think I'm a bit jealous. Excellent introduction to your world and your story. :)
MindiAllen MindiAllen Feb 26, 2015
Nice work!  I haven't  read it all yet but I am intrigued and will be back soon!
rtmwriter rtmwriter Feb 04, 2015
Well written as usual.  I didn't realize you had a new project up.  I liked Dungeon Memos and I'm pretty confident after reading this first section that I'm going to like this too.
KraigC KraigC Feb 03, 2015
@NightOwlHatter Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
NightOwlHatter NightOwlHatter Feb 03, 2015
Oh, I loved this.
                              I love when romance in stories start in a creative way like that, and in my opinion it doesn't happen as often as it should