She’s my sun, my moon, my everything, and… my sister

She’s my sun, my moon, my everything, and… my sister

55.5K Reads 452 Votes 11 Part Story
Leah By CSIEdgeworth05 Updated Mar 22, 2011

A typical cliché forbidden, sinful love story between two siblings.
When Desmond realized that he was not just in love with his sister, but MADLY in love with her. He tried his best to control his lust but express his love to her gradually. Still, his heart aching knowing the bloodline that ties them.

__ruby_ __ruby_ Jun 14, 2014
Ok I was just wondering but did u get inspiration for ur book title from jake millers song day without your love????
DamonSalvatore4EVA DamonSalvatore4EVA Dec 26, 2011
Sweet Sacrifice is an awesome song (y). haven't finished reading the chapter yet though :'D made me want to listen to the song hahaha
dIaMoNdPrInCeSs96 dIaMoNdPrInCeSs96 Jul 07, 2011
I think you did damn well for not being fluent in English! Your a really good writer but I agree wit luna17 more emotions. But other than that it's great!(:
AnonymouslySkilled AnonymouslySkilled Oct 14, 2010
WRITE MORE PLZ'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD 
                              can you message me when you do'? ty'!(:
luna17 luna17 Jun 29, 2010
i actually think you did really well for your first time. only next time try to put in more emotion. try to describe their emotions for each other more. but all in all, i liked it. keep it up :)