The Elemental Academy

The Elemental Academy

50.3K Reads 2.3K Votes 8 Part Story
LaurenMueller By LaurenMueller Updated Dec 15, 2014

There is a school for the gifted, but not the gifts you are expecting. These gifts are the power to control the elements. This academy finds these teens and kids and bring them to learn how to control their element. No one has been gifted with more than one elemental power. Until now.

  • academy
  • adventure
  • book
  • elements
  • school
Godlyadonis Godlyadonis Aug 22
Pacing and dialogue grammar and time skips are all over the place, not an awfully nice start.
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Sunyshine44 Sunyshine44 Jul 19
Willow: Who are you? 
                              Stranger:Jim Moriaty aka your worst nightmare * evil laughter *
A_love_of_reading A_love_of_reading Mar 07, 2016
I like how u started different! Most people start with the bell ringing or their alarm going off👍🏻👍🏻
Little_Heart_Attack Little_Heart_Attack Aug 09, 2016
My eyes just froze. He is a creepy man... watch out. Really though, doesn't she have a window to see who it is first, before opening the door?
KyleBaker1 KyleBaker1 Jul 20, 2016
when I read the part of the man all I could think is (in a creepy voice) helllllooooo