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He couldn't See Through My Smile

He couldn't See Through My Smile

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That Chick By Imperfect_Chick Updated Apr 21

A girl with a horrible past, smiles each day she comes to school and sits alone she doesn't want any one to pity her she just wants someone she can reside to someone who will listen and not judge. 
A boy who's brother died at war, his brother the closest person to him has been taken away he is now bitter and basically hates life and people for that matter but he is similar to this girl in a way he also wants someone who will listen and not judge...but life isn't fair as they both say.

What happens when this boy sees this girl at school with that fake smile plastered on her face he assumes her life is perfect yet he doesn't know anything about her jus that she gets straight A's and sits alone so naturally he forces himself to hate her and make her life just a little worse as he would put it.
But what happens when he gets jealous and really thinks about his actions and finds out about her past...what happens when he gets possessive and a bit over protective.

Not saying you need it but if you need an editor I don't mind, I've been wanting to start editing on here for a while :)
This boy needs to chill. Like someone needs to slap some sense into him soon or I will
he should not judge her. but maybe secretly she judges him too
Kariyamile Kariyamile Apr 09, 2015
I'm nuts, baby I'm mad, craziest friend you'll ever have!!!!
yeishaaa yeishaaa Dec 25, 2014
good job! such a good book and its interesting! keep up the great work!
littlecat101 littlecat101 Oct 06, 2014
Gosh I hate him he shouldn't just judges so easily love this book she's so sweat