The protector

The protector

23.2K Reads 1.1K Votes 37 Part Story
Alex By 8Winter8 Completed

My name is Emily, Emily emerald. I may appear normal with my brown hair and dull eyes but deep down inside I have a gift that nobody knows about. One could say I am special or unique, whatever seems to roll off the tongue a little smoother. 

Try to say it with me everyone unique, special. I thought I was those things but when you live in a world where being different is a horrible crime against  humanity.                                                                                                                    You might want to rethink what you believe and how you came to be because staying alive becomes harder every day.           

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EmbersStartFires EmbersStartFires Aug 30, 2015
You asked me a while ago to check out your work, and I've finally got round to it! XD I love what I've read so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
dancelover_7564 dancelover_7564 Jun 27, 2015
So far so good! I like it. Just work on your grammar and it will be perfect. Your writing is really descriptive.
Somerlea Somerlea Jun 24, 2015
You had me at the word COFFEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                              
                              I loved all the descriptions. Very vivid and so much detail. This is a great start to your story. And I love that it's about an Angel. Very cool.
_pure_imagination_ _pure_imagination_ May 18, 2015
Nice start! I'll give it a 8/10 because of some spelling mistakes, but overall good job! Also, you might want to work on the flow of it and use more commas and periods. 
anna_iluj anna_iluj Apr 21, 2015
So far so good,  a few punctuation/spelling errors, but my dad is an English teacher so I notice that in almost every story.
FlipThatBirdy FlipThatBirdy Apr 20, 2015
TAKE YOUR GRUBBY HANDS OFF THE MONEY THE PERSON IS TRYING TO MAKE IT RAIN