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Taken Captive

Taken Captive

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Katy Paige By Memow9876 Updated Nov 27, 2015

I heard the distant screams of the villagers, this only could mean one thing... A Raid.
Helena's village is raided, she and her heavily pregnant sister are taken as  captives, in their own home. With no one else living in the house, except Helena and her sister, Helena doesn't know what to do. 
What do these men want? How can Helena protect herself, her sister, and their home? Also why does Helena keep catching the leader eyes always on her?

********This story is inspired by a dream I had, it was so interesting that I had to put it into writing.*********

Amrak324 Amrak324 Mar 11, 2016
Hey, it could have been worse. It could have been bread. Too bad it wasn't a good old buttersock.
SpazNJoey SpazNJoey Oct 30, 2016
If you're open to suggestions.  The wording of the last sentence makes it seem like he took her wrists in his wrists, perhaps you could write that he took her wrists in his hands. Make it a bit more clear. 
                              Just a suggestion :)
Amrak324 Amrak324 Mar 11, 2016
I love the story and the suspense!!! I think I'm gonna like you.
bubbleteasandra bubbleteasandra Oct 05, 2015
I would have thrown cheese..but its food and I would never do that to food..×.× I would have eaten it instead
rosemarie151999 rosemarie151999 Aug 08, 2015
whatttt????  she knows this mysterious, bad, Leader person ...
philophobiamadness philophobiamadness May 06, 2015
Don't make me throw this cheese at you!! I'm warning you! I swear ill do it!