Zach is a very popular guy, he has a hot girlfriend and lots of friends. Every guys wants to be him, and every girl wants him. He had always thought that he was straight, that was until he met Ethan.
I feel like the first chapter was really choppy and all over the place the sentences just didn't flow into the next. But maybe that's just first chapter and starting a book and everything not to sound rude or anything but otherwise I think I'm gonna keep reading and see how it goes...
Bruhh I could be dien and my parents still wouldn't let me leave on the first day 😂
Maybe you have a problem with regards to past tense, present tense and future tense... I noticed it on the very first paragraph. With these, im not much eager to read your book... Sorry.
Hmmm.. Actually you are idealistic & creative person with enthusiasm but if I may add you need to learn on how to write better by reading books or articles which may helps
Its good for a first book I remember my first book it sucked
There's this YouTuber who is called Ethan and has a really loud laugh and his friends joke about him being gay