Straight?

Straight?

30K Reads 1K Votes 9 Part Story
reece :) By peecies_ Completed

Zach is a very popular guy, he has a hot girlfriend and lots of friends. Every guys wants to be him, and every girl wants him. He had always thought that he was straight, that was until he met Ethan.

ssoccer903 ssoccer903 Sep 05, 2016
I feel like the first chapter was really choppy and all over the place the sentences just didn't flow into the next. But maybe that's just first chapter and starting a book and everything not to sound rude or anything but otherwise I think I'm gonna keep reading and see how it goes...
AnimeGurlOtakuLove AnimeGurlOtakuLove Jul 05, 2016
Bruhh I could be dien and my parents still wouldn't let me leave on the first day 😂
Part-time-ghoul Part-time-ghoul 3 days ago
I'm such trash I recognized Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalekis lips on your cover
FlawfulAF FlawfulAF Dec 27, 2016
The story seems to be progressing too fast give the characters some development before any major changes but hey that's only my opinion
BraveApollo BraveApollo Jul 23, 2016
Maybe you have a problem with regards to past tense, present tense and future tense... I noticed it on the very first paragraph. With these, im not much eager to read your book... Sorry.
Lightningwolf151 Lightningwolf151 Sep 30, 2016
Its good for a first book I remember my first book it sucked